I got to be honest with you, I barely skimmed the article because it was so long. If there were some examples, it would have caught my eye, and I think I would have spent some time reading around the example.
I definitely understand, I should publish that one article as 4-5 smaller ones. I think my next post in the series will be those examples + commentary. ie. Screenshots of various landers from around the web with notes on what works and what doesn't. I'm hesitant to do that as I don't have any real data on other peoples conversion rates, so I could descend into speculation pretty quickly.