It demonstrates that your criticism of the syntax of array languages boils down to “it’s different than the things I already know” and that not using words in a programming language isn’t a meaningful barrier to most people, given that most programmers in the world overcame this obstacle with no sweat. There is a meaningful criticism to be had in the area of syntax, but this is not it IMO. One valid criticism I know of is that most array languages have a context-sensitive syntax: you need to maintain a symbol table in your head to know how to parenthesise a line of code. Fortunately, BQN fixes this issue by using a context-free grammar.
Lisp is defined by much more than syntax. I certainly see many flaws in it (starting with the cons cell), which are total deal-breakers for me and have nothing to do with syntax. I think your view that syntax is the biggest obstacle to Lisp’s popularity isn’t as evident as you claim. There are too many other, IMO bigger obstacles.