You're complaining about a Writer writing?
To be overly verbose is neither.
1. What the old clause of the license was 2. What kind of unintended side effect it had 3. What the new clause addressing this is
Summing up those 3 points results in a clear paragraph of maybe 5 to 10 lines. Meanwhile I challenge anyone who hasn't read it to extract that content from the article in less than 15 minutes.
This sentence is 1087 words in. That's a long "light introduction".