First, I’m not sure why the author has chosen to represent music as a graph showing the relationship between individual notes. Usually we analyze Bach in terms of harmony and the relationship between each chord. In fact, we don’t even care about chord names, we just care about the relative differences, which is why we use Roman numerals to analyze instead of note names.
I think there is something interesting in using a graph to model voicings, but the example here seems to ignore the very methods Bach used to compose.
To that end, we very much already know what Bach does to create tension and release or surpass the listener. It’s in the name, “deceptive cadence”.
So I would have loved for this to have confirmed - or refuted! - something we already know. For example, to quantify for us why a V-vi cadence feels deceptive. But we never get there. We have a set of graph techniques applied to Bach’s music without much discussion of why we believe that way of modeling makes sense.