It starts with unsubstantiated claims that X suffers from "bloat" despite being capable of running on a 486 and dismissing the fact that the average Wayland compositor + necessary infrastructure is much more "bloated" than X ever was.
It fails to distinguish between compositing and hardware accelerated blit operations that allow X to display multiple windows without the need for a compositor.
It talks about hardware planes but fails to mention that no Wayland compositor so far is capable of using them whereas X is using them for the mouse for a long time (which avoids mouse stuttering on high GPU/CPU load).
It proclaims that certain protocols are "commonly used" when they are really in a experimental phase or actually not commonly used.
I get it. Linux userland graphics is huge a mess right now. Mostly because Wayland caused a huge amount of uncertainty and fragmentation. At least call it out as such and don't pretend otherwise.