I’d encourage you to temper the hyperbole.
It’s easy to dismiss these types of articles as straight sales pitches when the problem is presented as “…a fate worse than death.” and the solution so easy and painless, you’d be a fool not to dismiss any other approach! Thats the MO of snake oil sellers.
Instead, I think a more objective comparison with much less editorializing would be less of a turn off for folks curious about a better approach to solve a problem that you did well in outlining at the beginning of the article.
Hopefully you take this as constructive feedback! I think the substance of the article is interesting, I was just turned off by the presentation.