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Edit: Here is an essay in the "Bryn Mawr Classical Review," which touches on the issue of the slave girls killed at the end. Look for the paragraph that begins:
"This brings me to the episode often discussed by Wilson, the killing of the slaves in Odyssey 22."
This particular essay doesn't touch on what I've said about Odysseus and Telemachus, but it does touch on the fact that her own opinion of things influences the translation.
https://bmcr.brynmawr.edu/2018/2018.10.58
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Edit: And here is a review in the "London Review of Books," which touches on what I said:
"This makes him sound more of a brat and much less of a would-be hero than he does in the Greek."
https://www.lrb.co.uk/the-paper/v40/n08/colin-burrow/light-t...