Communication is the least of his problems. I read his post just fine.

It's definitely not the most well written and clear post but it is far away from anything that I would call a "problem". He can definitely shorten his cv, but again this is not a "problem".

The tough market is 100 percent the most likely culprit.

Here's his real problem:

https://digg.com/data-viz/link/the-best-and-worst-us-states-...

If he's in tech and in one of those problem states then he's doubly screwed.