As an American, I find this a very odd way to start an email.
It always makes me think of Civil War letters or something.
> I have a big favor to ask, and I truly appreciate your time and consideration.
This also seems like too much, and too early in the message. Leave the "thank you" for the end.
How would you start a conversation with a stranger?
``` I want $something
EOM ```
for some folks, filler sentences are a sign of politeness.
Dewan,
Hi, this is bluedino, we've spoken a few times on Hacker News. I saw that your company has openings for QBasic programmers on their website, do you know anything about this position? I'm interested in applying and would love a referral or introduction to the hiring manager/team leader if that's possible.
Appreciate your time, BD
> The term babu English is a disparaging name for a florid, overly polite, or unidiomatic variety of English historically associated with Indians who have limited proficiency in English.