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Fair enough. Though adding a larger dose of originality couldn't hurt.

Interesting business proposition. I may have missed this in the deck, but do you already have preliminary/pilot relationships with celebrities and brands/retailers?

Francis and the Everest team are top notch!

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Ouch about the originality - but you're right.

Francis is going to make it big. He has it.

A savvy audience (e.g., Peter Thiel) will remember the Everest deck. In fact, I've heard it discussed in several circles over the past few months. Going with what works is generally a smart approach, but you don't want to look like a carbon copy/an also ran. This is why I bring up the question of originality and suggest you add a bit more of your team's personality to the deck.

Otherwise, it's a great start. My two cents.

Thanks for the feedback :D Genuinely appreciated.

I'll keep working away at it.

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