These aren’t run down hotels. These are both rated 4.2 [0, 1] and while aren’t the greatest in the world are both Hiltons and decent hotels.
The criticism doesn’t change the nature of the original article in that San Francisco is less good as it once was and as a result businesses are defaulting on pretty big things rather than invest in keeping them up.
The inaccurate language seems to have a “everything’s fine here” kind of vibe to me.
[0] Hilton San Francisco Union Square (415) 771-1400 https://maps.app.goo.gl/EPnQC4pbbwRKNjNh9?g_st=ic
[1] Parc 55 San Francisco - a Hilton Hotel (415) 392-8000 https://maps.app.goo.gl/p9SprpPdGZxzbejf8?g_st=ic