Arthropod head problem
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Arthropod Head Problem is a really good name for a band
Looks like it's about the evolution of arthropod head from segmented worms, with disagreements on what arthropod parts are homologous (evolutionary correspondent) to which parts of segmented worms. Please correct me if I'm wrong.
For example, the very first sentence: "The (pan)arthropod head problem[4] is a long-standing zoological dispute concerning the segmental composition of the heads of the various arthropod groups, and how they are evolutionarily related to each other". So even if you understand the jargon more or less, the way this is written makes it feel like "there's a lot more essential detail" that's not covered in this sentence. But once you read the background section, and you get to this sentence "The challenge that the arthropod head problem has to address is to what extent the various structures of the arthropod head can be resolved into a set of hypothetical ancestral segments", you realize that actually the initial summary is actually fairly complete, but just strangely uncommital.
Rewriting the first sentence to be more direct might result in: "The arthropod head problem is a zoological dispute over the extent that the various structures of the arthropod head amongst different types of arthropods can be resolved into a set of hypothetical ancestral structures". Or maybe a less aggressive change: "The (pan) arthropod head problem is a zoological dispute over the segments that make up the heads of the various arthropod groups, and how these different segments are evolutionary related to each other".
The background section itself could probably be improved by moving the first sentence deeper into the section, and probably doing a paragraph break right before the "The challenge that the arthropod head problem has to address.." sentence to make it easier for skimmers (or glazed out readers) to pick out a significant segment.
In fact, maybe the problem with the beginning section is that it's focused on the "meta". Every single sentence contains information about the history and development of "the problem", while only one sentence directly talks about "problem", and like two sentences talk about the scope and some of the tools used to address the problem. Perhaps portions of the "Background" section should be raised to the top level, and the history stuff moved to a history (or even the background...) section.
I think it's reasonable for some articles to be pretty jargon dense, but the opening bits should make some accommodations to less specialized audiences.
Most people suck so very much at writing clearly and concisely.
And that usually has little to do with assuming knowledge in the audience; people who have the requisite knowledge are just better able to penetrate the bad writing, but would still be able to digest a better article much more quickly.
All segmented animals can be represented as a list of ordered segments. Different lists can have different lengths, but the number of elements inside each type of animal is very stable. We are segmented animals also.
An hypothetical animal with five segments in its body plan, would be represented as:
'(1 2 3 4 5)
Each element in (cdr '(1 2 3 4 5)) has the ability to grow a couple of structures called appendix. The first segment will bear another special type of sensors designed to detect light, the eyes. Animals use chemical gradients to modulate the appendix separately and turn them into everything that will need, in the right place.
The concept of chemical gradients is not difficult to understand. Drop some chemical in the first segment and let it to diffuse towards the end of the chain. The first part will receive much more chemicals than the tail, activating different genes. Our embryo now looks like this:
'(head torax abdomen)
Rinse and repeat for each element, nesting lists. This very smart process is all that we need to make an animal while guaranteeing that our embryo will never develop a couple of ears in the legs [1].
[1](... Unless is an arthropod, because each type of animals have their own ways to solve the problems)
In the real life this translates to:
'( antenna leg leg leg)
This is an hexapod, for example an ant, but:
'( fake-antenna leg leg leg)
This is Myrmarachne a spider mimicking an ant. It moves its first pair of legs to simulate an antenna and trick its preys, but we know that the structure is different. If you are an ant, you would be dead by now.
'( antenna antenna antenna leg leg)
This animal does not exist. Not in this planet. Is an alien.
If we have a partial fossil with one leg and a couple of wings, we can say that this was a modern insect. Wings developed only in the modern insects.
The appendix and its location are so different among the main groups of arthropods and so fixed inside the groups that we can safely say that trilobytes didn't fall in any known category of alive arthropod. Those were not crustaceans and all went extinct.
We also know that spiders are not just crustaceans that lose a couple of legs and a couple of antennas. Its legs are placed in different segments, and the auxiliar structures in its head are totally different.