Is there something especially interesting about this? GPT is able to to make the message more concise, unsurprisingly, and interprets "10x more persuasive" as "using more emphatic versions of the same words".
What is interesting/noteworthy (to me) is that this was the first concrete instance I have used ChatGPT to "do something useful". Up until now, all the twitter threads and Linux VM's were cute toys, but this is an actual situation that I need resolved and I preferred it's edited version over my original.