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Is "affordable" really the differentiator you want to be going for? Cheap customers are the absolute worst.

Your pricing seems to imply it's a one-off payment of $11 btw

What this person said - the single biggest, clearest message that you're sending with this is that your product is CHEAP. Cheap is fine, but I'd recommend leading with the actual value that your product can produce for customers. Cheap can come at the end, when they're making a decision between your product and another one.

Also, analytics is plural, so your major headline should be "...analytics that are..."

Also agree with the "affordable" highlighting, adding that the large zigzag underline jarred my parsing of the rest of the sentence. As for "analytics" I can see treating it as a group like mathematics so singular can also be ok. In these cases I search "x is" and "x are" and see what has higher count.

The only new thing I'll mention is the middle pricing should be called something default and innocuous like "Standard" rather than "Commercial" that sounds like more than I should need.

Changed :) Thank you for the feedback!

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