Honestly...neurotic and counterproductive. You have to add too much useless words to make it fit. Most of these comments could be much shorter and easier to read. Also too much separators and whitespace around those comments.
I think it's awesome and I'm trying to do this too. It is a great trick that forces you
to re-read your comments and be as clear as you can. Also, you take the time to find
synonyms and look for typos. Overall it's a great way to learn how to be thorough.