Ask HN: Help with writing a job-seeking article for sydney

Hi all,

I've been working a lot lately with a friend, helping with her job hunt as she has just finished her studies. I thought i'd write a blog article about it, as over the last few months we've tried a whole bunch of ideas, and was just wondering if anyone here would mind making a few suggestions?

When i finished writing it, i felt like there should be more to it, i feel like i've missed some important things, but i just can't put my finger on it for some reason.

Anyway here's the article:

http://splinter.com.au/how-to-get-a-programming-or-design-job-in-syd

Cheers all