Here’s a simple tip that has improved my own style: use bullet points aggressively.
People don't want to read what looks like a wall of text, but will happily jump to a nice convenient list of things.
People that enjoy Pynchon are a trivial percentage of the population. Good communication requires understanding what the target audience will actually pay attention to. It's a tightrope.
* Use
* bullet
* points
* aggressively