> Over the course of the outage, we continued to monitor our service status, and worked with some of the affected users to narrow down the source of the problem.
> On July 14th, at 19:14 UTC we were able to identify that the problem was within our us-west3 region, which we then took offline, directing traffic to other nearby regions instead.
The time difference between when the first reports came in and when it was confirmed is a little concerning.
As an aside:
> ... approximately 18:00 UTC ...
> ... just over 24 hours ...
> ... For a period of around 24 hours, some users in the us-west3 region
> ... less than 30 minutes ...
> ... On July 13th, at around 18:45 UTC we started to receive reports of an outage from a small number of users. ...
"Approximately", "just", "around", "some", "small number of". It goes on and on. I disagree with the stylistic approach of being less specific in posts like these. A "small number of users" is relative. As readers, we have no idea what your typical load may be. Small may be a large number to us. "Just" over 24 hours is 26 hours? 24.5 hours? I implore you to be specific when you have the actual data.
These terms read as weasel words, and impact your effort at being fully transparent.