My criticism is that nearly the whole page is the comment section. The article itself is very short--pasted into an editor, ~200 words excluding titles. Perhaps putting every sentence on its own line also inflates an author's sense of how long their article is.

I'm not really a fan of 1 line per sentence as the default, but agree with more breaks. Also know your audience. My default structure is:

- Ask for what I want/why did I sent this email.

- Explanation why using logical breaks.

Which usually means I write my email, take the last line and make it first.

If I'm emailing a technical colleague I'll include more details. CEO, 1 line bullet points.

I don't think it's awful. As he says you shouldn't publish your text that way. In editing phase you will merge one line sentences into paragraphs.

Did you even read to the second paragraph of the article??? He says specifically in the source... not the render.

Agree