This is good. As someone who's watched this process many times, I can tell you he learned pretty much everything there is to learn about raising VC the first time through.

The only thing that could make his advice inaccurate is that he was raising money for such a good startup. And in particular, one with traction. As he points out, traction trumps everything. So this is essentially a report on what it was like to travel through VC land in the express lane. The scary thing is, even then it took 4 months. It might have gone faster if he'd been on the west coast, but it still would have been a big time suck.