Ask HN: Which would be a better splash page?

After receiving some mixed feedback on my previous splash page, I put together another one. I was hoping to get some feedback on it.

Option 1: http://www.mesmira.com (the new one, high-level concept and some explanatory pitch text)

Option 2: http://www.mesmira.com/splash (a screenshot of the actual product with the value proposition as text markers)

Option 3: not good enough. Again!

Any suggestions/feedback would be highly appreciated.

Thanks, Aditya