I'm not sure if it's some sort of anti-plagiarism fingerprinting technique, but this article reads as though random words have been deleted from it.
> “I’m interested stories of redemption…”
(I checked the source and there is an 'in' in the original.)
> that seemed to be very what this essay was about
> essay is over 4,500 long.
> writing process wasn’t the focus essay
> focuses heavily on the struggles of her over the year