Show HN: SupportBee - A Help Desk that is a joy to use
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Website copy could be better. Try to explain, why it is a joy to use. Also I think, the space is not well used, too much white space, I don't know exactly what but there's something wrong with typography, you can try experimenting with font-family/font-size. Green 'signup now' button is over done imo.
The three points you have mentioned on website, should be placed to get the maximum attention of the visitor.
Overall it's a good start for the beta. All the best.
If you are curious, this is a single page Backbone.js app backed by a Rails' API. More tech details are at http://devblog.supportbee.com
2. Make separate videos if you want to tell too many things. StoryTelling - What you missed in your last startup and why you made this, a Separate video on SupportBee's Features, How to use videos, a Team Video, your Technology Stack and philosophy.
1. Talking a bit too fast.
2. Covering too many things in one shot - perhaps if you just focused on one or two benefits and show how a user achieves those benefits
3. You do somethings before you talk about them fully
4. There should be a clear break between different things you do
Hope that helps...
Do you have any feedback on the product/product philosophy? Would love to hear that too.