if it was good enough to get the idea across in order to be corrected, it succeeded.
grammar is fake. language is made up, didn't you know?
pithy response aside, i work with a lot of ESL international folks, caring about grammar comes _way_ after being gracious in communication.
edit: also, period goes inside quote, even with ellipses. https://writingcenter.uagc.edu/ellipses. secondly, the extra comma before "as well" is unecessary. https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/231256/can-i-put...