> the collapse of Mesopotamia more than four millennia ago, due to drought and agricultural failures
Mesopotamia collapsed? That's totally wrong. The author confused the Akkadian empire, founded by Sargon, with the civilisation of Mesopotamia. The short-lived empire ended circa 4000 BP, but the local cities continued to thrive for centuries, with the same language, the same culture... the same civilisation. And the "drought and agricultural failures" causing the collapse of the empire is a very controversial theory, since it may have happened after the end of the empire.
> a collapse like that of the Roman empire
Most modern historians deny that the Roman empire suffered a brutal "collapse". There was a transformation (a decline?) of the central Roman State for centuries, but in many places there was no collapse, no sudden change, but a form of continuity.
> Many conquered nations were plausibly ready to collapse
Once more, the author seems to mix up many concepts: the State, the nation, the civilisation. A conquered nation does not automatically collapse, nor does its "civilisation" end. Even the Romans used to joke about this, saying their troops conquered Greece, but Greece conquered the Roman's minds. Greek was spoken from Rome to modern Afghanistan long after Athens had lost its power and independence. And when Babylon fell to Cyrus, which "nation" did "collapse"? The Persian rulers even restored the temple of Marduk, the local main divinity.