Password Manager Security [pdf] (2020)

- 2.2.1 naming Adv_r may makes it easier to read (as you did with challenger Ch)

- 2.2.1 4th bullet point, 2.2.2 3rd bullet point: iff

I like the paper, will be curious if and how the authors proceed with their research. Maybe giving some suggestions how to make it better or come with a theoretical analysis of what should be the gold standard.