A survival guide for Unix beginners
matt.might.net
matt.might.net
"What is computing with Unix?
Unix is a family of operating systems and environments that exploits the power of linguistic abstraction and composition to orchestrate tasks."
That isn't a question a newbie would ask or an answer they'd understand. Instead, I think the following would have been (less accurate but) much more helpful:
"What is Unix?
Unix is just an operating system, like Microsoft Windows or Mac OS."
Know your audience!
Your answer is too simple for them.
It should be strongly mentioned that "unix" best describes a class of operating systems including "proper" unix systems like OSX and the "unix-like" systems like linux.
It's also important to divorce the students from that layman perspective of "operating systems are all that graphical shit I see on my screen". In fact, I think that might be the most important part.