Inverted Pyramid: Writing for Comprehension
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"Dad, 42, saved a four-year-old on Haberdashery High Street this afternoon by pulling him out of the way of an oncoming bus"
Who, what, where, when, how, why.
Dad, saves child, on the high street, this arvo, pulls him to safety, because he's a dad and that's someone's kid.
The first line and paragraph tells you everything you need to be drawn into the story.
I find this topic incredibly interesting but lack access to good and sound strategies. Most of it are medium style "hacks" I despise.
My problem with my writing usually is, it's too scientific, too elaborate, and the best part usually comes at the end (inverted pyramid might help with this one).
Thanks!