The first sentences are good, but the last part is a bit hard to understand.

Do you write/speak very fast maybe? If I remember correctly you commented maybe less 2 than minutes after I posted, that seems extremely fast to write that much. Maybe if you just slowed down a little bit and spent time to make it more digestible it could be easier to read :)(it also might help you be less hurtful IRL)I'm a bit like that too

not trying to criticize you ;)