Just a general tip, for all time-- you should treat custom modifications of OSI licenses exactly the same as HN would treat custom modifications to cryptographic primitives. In both cases, don't do them, for the same reasons-- you don't have the domain expertise to understand the implications of what you're doing. And for any case that truly matters, you're almost guaranteed to find out the hard way that the real-life implications are different than what you were aiming for.[1]

Anyway, looks below like you're considering a regular 3-clause MIT, so good going on that. :)

1: Hell, even for long-standing OSI licenses the real-life legal implications may be different than what the OSI community assumed. But at least there you'd be in a billion dollar yacht with many others, as opposed to stranded on a desert island with your modified MIT.