That example at the end is just so cringeworthy. The editor deserves to be dragged through the mud for basically re-writing the entire work.
Edit: While substitutions and what you do, when your Mom sees you writing a piece and points at a word, asking, if you maybe could do without it, are a not so much a necessary thing, the writer of this comment doesn't fully understand how this is the professional accomplishment that it is. Last Christmas, I didn't go skiing. How is this even editing? ;-)
Did this editor really think nobody would notice? That nobody would get pissed and complain? I just don’t get it
Besides, Bukowski the writer is famous but Bukowski the poet, like all poetry, enjoys very limited popularity.