Scala is up to "10x more concise" as Java - your numbers suggest as they represent more or less the same structure in Scala and Clojure - a 4x reduction from Scala to Clojure (260 loc vs. 1000 loc).
This would result in a 12x (4x3) to (4x10) 40x reduction from Java to Clojure. Which is hard to believe.
Take this example where [edit] Python is compared to Java with a 1.7x size reduction:
http://codemonkeyism.com/comparing-java-and-python-is-java-1...
Could you give an example to reduce this code by 12x, or even by 40x? The biggest reduction LOC would probably be the reduction in constructor size with Scala case clases.