A deleted subplot from “The Matrix” contradicts its sequels
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1. Morpheus has found other people he believes to be "the One" before. He was wrong, and they died or otherwise didn't pan out. (I'm fairly sure this is still referenced in the movie? Just not the specific deleted scenes that the article mentions.)
2. There is a larger cycle of "the One" resetting Zion as part of the machines' system of control. This has happened a bunch of times now.
These are different things. They have nothing to do with each other. They are neither mutually exclusive nor mutually supporting.
I agree with the author that Cypher would have been a more nuanced character had he more justification for his doubt.
From a narrative point of view, it would be confusing as hell to have five predecessors in this iteration of the matrix, as well as five predecessors across five previous iterations of the matrix.
Could both have been part of the same overarching, pre-planned plot? Sure. But is that likely? Not at all.
To be fair though I always assumed the second and third matrixes were retroactive revisions. They are just so different from the first one.
Had the Morpheus 5 been kept in, it would have been trivial to use a different number of cycles (7, 10, 400, whatever) and avoid the confusion.
the matrix could have gone trought 5 iteractions of the one cicle that morpheus knew nothing about, each resulting in the destruction of zion.
yet in this current version of the matrix, during this cicle, morpheus could have find 5 previous individuals that he tough were candidates to being the one, all that were ultimately not the one and who died fighting smith, before finaly finding neo the actual one for this latest cicle of the matrix.
I agree with you, but I also agree with the poster that they didn't actually have any of this in mind when they wrote Matrix 1, any more than George Lucas already wrote Star Wars I-III and then started filming with part IV.
But the article fails to show that at all.
The story presented here is that there were five previous "Ones" and they all faced an agent and were killed. But, if you recall, that's exactly what happens with Neo. His death at the hands of an agent is exactly what "unlocks" his powers. There would need to a be a couple more dialogues in the sequels but it would be trivial to address what happened to the other five after they were "killed".
So while it may be true that there was no master plan for the sequels (and I have absolutely no doubt they came out very different than originally envisioned - that's the creative process), I don't necessarily see this as strong evidence of that fact.
It was probably cut because the subplot just adds complexity for the audience without really adding much to the story.
Morpheus conviction that Neo is the one but everyone else being more ambivalent seem to imply that Morpheus could be or has been wrong in the past.
I agree that being wrong wouldn’t necessarily conflict with the rest of the film. I think it adds a lot of character to the story.
I'm pretty sure it's even hinted in the film how Morpheus had thought Trinity was the One until the Oracle had told her that she wasn't - but that she would fall in love with the One.
All stories are a creative process and small and large details can change as a story continues.
For instance, originally machines used human brains as part of a greater neural net within the matrix. But then executives forced the Wachowskis to change that idea into humans-as-batteries to make it more palatable. So they re-write portions of the arc to fit that new narrative.
So all I see here is the "5 predecessors" plot removed from the first movie becoming 5 predecessors in the "matrix is a lie" plot, which may not have changed much. It's silly to speculate without just asking The Wachowskis directly.
I only watched all 3 way back when and was much younger, but the main parts of the plot seemed coherent to me at the time.
And I'm not saying it isn't coherent in that one can't follow from the other, or that you can't find a way to make a linear narrative out of that. I'm just saying it's a very pronounced change in focus/tone/direction, whatever you want to call it. And to me, from the very first time I saw Matrix 2, I had this strong sense of "wow, that came out of nowhere and went off on a weird direction". It felt very disjointed and weird to me all along.
Anyway... not trying to change anyone's mind here. This is obviously pretty subjective. All I can say is that to me, it's very clear that Matrix 2/3 represent a substantially different (albeit related) story than Matrix 1. If anyone disagrees, well, so be it.
A throwaway thing? What?
This is where humanity lives outside the Matrix. This is the dialogue:
NEO Zion?
TANK If this war ended tomorrow, Zion is where the party would be.
NEO It's a city?
TANK The last human city. The only place we got left.
NEO Where is it?
TANK Deep underground. Near the earth's core, where it's still warm. You live long enough, you might even see it.
Further on Zion is mentioned in connection with the warning and later in the even more important topic of the access codes and coming from Tanks mouth:
TANK We can't let that happen, Trinity. Zion is more important than me. Or you, or even Morpheus
Or Agent Smiths:
AGENT SMITH Once Zion is destroyed, there is no need for me to be here. Do you understand? I need the codes. I have to get inside Zion. You have to tell me how.
I mean seriously. I have the feeling you did not pay attention which is the feeling I get from most of the people who are an the hate train. It seems like those people live off the hype for the fight scenes and visual impact of the first movie which none of the others could deliver because the revolution has happened already. But all movies after Matrix had that problem too and it doesn't say anything about the progression of the story of Matrix.
> But the meat of the story is about the drive to free all of humanity from the Marix. In Matrix 2/3 that element entirely disappears and the "resolution" is some sort of truce between the humans and the machines... that doesn't jibe at all with the "destroy the Matrix" idea, IMO.
It doesn't disappear. It is the main part of the story of those movies. The decisions need to do are just about that. This is what is important and the result is a consequence of what happened along the way.
You should really consider watching those movies again because I think you've missed a lot there.
I have watched The Matrix probably 100+ times (and the sequels a good 30 or more times each). I really doubt that I'm the one who's "missing something" here.
Anyway, if you see it differently, then you see it differently. That's totally acceptable. Two people can watch the same movie(s) and reach different interpretations. Nothing unusual about that.
"I can't see how anyone ever thought..."
and end the conversation with:
"Nothing unusual about two people reaching different interpretations. "
Whether the Matrix was intended as 1 movie or 3 movies is inconsequential in the grand scheme, but seeing this side of human nature is kind of interesting and somewhat amusing.
"No one could possibly watch the Matrix and think that..."
I'm just saying I personally don't see the thought process, and the interpretation(s) where the movies are a cleanly connected, smooth, linear, contiguous narrative. I'm not saying that such processes and interpretations can't exist, hence
"Two people can watch the same movie(s) and reach different interpretations."
Anyway...
I'd have peferred them to explain how Neo was able to use the "force" against the machines, see their energy while blind, and who's the Zero. Expected a replica of Neo to be used by the machines or something in the lines of "don't be evil" becomes evil, as a critique to modern tech.
That would explain the powers he gets in real world.
I have no way to tell how large a kernel of truth this story may contain, but it certainly feels like it could be true.
OK, I could see that. It would explain why there was such a shift between Matrix 1 and Matrix 2/3.
That is, sure, they had a general sense of the surrounding world and events and what might happen next. But when someone actually said "here's an unfathomably large amount of money, please make these movies" they had to actually come up with all the concrete details and probably moved a lot of things around while doing so.
Then they had to turn it into a trilogy again, and, well, it's hard to unscramble an egg.
The prequel trilogy then just made it “Anakin’s story” and in 2008 he was saying he was done and there was no thereafter. Given how bad those were, he would probably have not done much better than Disney for the last three.
> No, the Story of the One in the first movie always meant to be non-canon, an intentional misleading of the audience, a red herring.
It's not "non-canon", it is canon that Morpheus and others believed this "Story of the One". That it wasn't true does not make the belief (that the characters' held) non-canon, just wrong. To be non-canon then you'd actually be throwing away the first movie, but that's not the case, instead the information available to the characters has been expanded and so a once-held belief becomes falsified.
Tangent: aside from the vastly inferior action scenes and the unnecessary, if not severely distracting throwbacks / returning characters I thought the new film was decent. They didn't get it right, but it was much better than most franchise resurrection attempts.
The first act, I thought, was great. But I was disappointed when the writers showed their self awareness of missing the point when remaking a piece of art, and then... kind of did it anyway with the same level of depth for many scenes. I despised, in particular, how in the original films Neo's powers were just him being a god and understanding the world, but in the new one he kind of grunts and expels physical effort to do them like a typical superhero. That's just a different style altogether, and the original makes it abundantly clear that something like age shouldn't affect it. /rant.
And it's not like I was anyone special, just someone he ran into at a party, so I'm sure he was telling lots of people that after Dune Messiah came out.
Spoiler: I suspect none of that was true.
Dune is surprisingly tightly plotted so he probably left a lot of items “on the cutting room floor”.
Although I personally became bored with the sequels, they didn’t have the “just turning the crank to get some bucks” feeling that a lot of sequels do. They simply weren’t for me, which is fine.
If you watch carefully, you can penetrate Laurence Fishburne's incredible screen presence by the end of the second movie to notice that Morpheus is a naive tool, quite a while before the character figures it out himself. (In fact, I find him a bit cringe to watch in the third movie because by then it's obvious that almost every word out of his mouth is unjustified by reality, and he is only right by coincidence. I don't mean the bad accidental sort of cringe, it's deliberate, and it works fine. Legit character choice.) It doesn't change the overarching story that much to make it possible to derive that in the first movie. It would just change the first movie.
I'm not sure accommodating this revelation would require any changes in the second and third movie. You could add a conversation where Neo confronts Morpheus more directly, but it wouldn't be obligatory.
My guess is that the reality is the same for them as it is for a lot of us. How many times have you worked on a project, either personally or at work, and come up with hopes and dreams about what Phase 2 will look like? Tons of times for me. But even when I stick with the design we hoped and dreamed about (which is basically the task I'm working on right now at work), there's still a lot between those hopes and dreams and running code. I bet there was at least thoughts about future plans, but there's a lot between hopes and dreams and a functioning script, let alone actual movies.
However, I think the whole discussion about canon is nonsense. For this, for Star Wars, and for everything.
Is anything Star Wars watchable after 1983? No. So why even talk about canon? Just watch the good stuff and ignore the rest. Is any Matrix movie after 1999 worth watching? Of course not. So why even talk about it?
In both cases, the original writers didn't respect their own material; why should you respect their idea of what the "real" story is? Life is too short for bad art.
Personally, I found Revelations to be some what weaker than the rest, but they all form a pretty compelling and enjoyable series.
Of course the Matrix Trilogy wasn't fully written out when they made the first film. The Wachowskis never claimed that. They said it was all conceived as one whole, and the specific execution of that concept (i.e., the screenplays) changed after the first film to reflect the narrative that actually made the final cut in the first movie... Which is exactly how things work in Hollywood, because canon is only what actually makes it onto the screen.
That being said as much as the second two films get shit on I rewatched both recently and number 2 really is quite good - not as iconic as the first Matrix but still solid. Unfortunately it seems its reputation got really spoiled by the third movie which.......well we all know how that goes.
Would very much appreciate insight on this from someone who has studied literature and/or folklore extensively (though I suspect this might not be the right place to find such a person).
I agree. It's what you get when you combine obsessive fan-geekery with milking some IP for every cent it's worth with sequels and tie-ins.
This really shouldn't be too surprising to anyone who has worked on a creative project over an extended period of time. Heck, NaNoWriMo has you write a novel in a single month and I doubt many people have the novel hit exactly all the plot points they had originally thought up. How much more should we expect plans to change over many years (and with external constraints).
Seems pretty natural to me.
Also interestingly from that link, the end of that version of season 5 where Sinclair was believed to be a traitor, got rolled into the planned plot of the Crusade spinoff, though the series was canceled before they reached that point.
Like, shooting and then deleting a scene that you think might hurt the plot in future movies is "carefully planning in advance."
I disagree with the article’s premise that it would have changed the story of the sequels - but they make a good case for it being cut for incidental reasons.
> In the introduction to a copy of the Final Shooting Script included in the book, editor Spencer Lamm notes that “everything” in the script was filmed but “changes occurred during editing.”[...]the part “where Cypher tells Neo there were five potential Ones before him was shot and then cut in postproduction for reasons only [Lana] and [Lilly] know.”
So the quotes here say they shot everything in the script, but then they made changes in the editing room for reasons only known to the writers of the trilogy. It could be for runtime! I don't think there's any definitive evidence it isn't, but clearly this account also supports them shooting something that they later realized would screw up their planned script.
I also wanna say that there is an ambiguity over if the five "ones" are actually Ones or just people Morpheus believed are ones. It wouldn't contradict the later plotline of Neo being the sixth One for Morpheus to mistakenly free five people who aren't Ones and get them killed - but it would be really confusing! Since the people in question are summarizing a deleted plot arc that the directors removed, I suspect they may be summarizing in a way that wasn't accurate to the understanding of those directors.
All of which is to say that the blog article is telling a very specific story about what seems like pretty ambiguous evidence. The script had reference to previous people pulled out as potential Ones having died to agents. It would be confusing to the audience for these to be five "fake" ones and then also have five previous real Ones, but it wouldn't be internally contradictory. The only way it directly contradicts is with a very narrow meaning which I don't think the blog post convinced me was intended. Beyond that - as I said above - since they never put it into the movie I think this could count as "being intended from the beginning" where the beginning is the release of the first movie.
This of course ended terribly in Episode 8 when Johnson single-handedly destroyed everything Abrams had put in place and left him nothing to go on for the finale.
Even the Star Wars expanded universe was carefully and competently taken care of prior the acquisition - so many books and yet so little inconsistencies. Then Disney decided to throw all of the decades of worldbuilding away for three shitty plots and an endless lot of Rey-based Rule 34 material.
The Star Trek reboot quality is similarly questionable, but at least they didn't simply go ahead and un-canon all existing works.
Good on ya to point out the silver lining.
ETA: not to mention, the "character dies and gets reborn" plot was already questionable in TCW (where Darth Maul was revealed to have survived being sliced in half by Qui-Gon Jinn in Episode 1), but that one at least had a decent bit of usage... Palpatine's appearance was mostly the reveal at the end on Exegol, a fight and his (hopefully final...) death.
The only way I can see any future films being set is somewhere between the trilogies (there's more than enough to be explained between EP3/4 or between 6/7) or an alternative-timeline reboot happening after EP6 (or maaaaybe but difficult given the deaths of primary actors, a timeline split caused by the destruction of that superlaser planet).
(Seriously, time travel as a concept is annoying, especially when everyone uses their own version of how it works!)
All symptoms of staggering mismanagement by Disney, of course. A trilogy with a stupid planned plot arc would have been better than the sequence of "solid but uninspired Star Wars throwback" + "interesting and out there reinterpretation of the mythos" + "but what if RotJ again but dumber?"
I thought it was straightforward that the first movie is what they set out to make, complete in its own right. It's basically anti-authoritarian hacking/phreaking (abstraction fucking) plus kung fu. Neo achieves the win condition, and the story ends to avoid having to grapple with any implications of achieving godmode.
Then the 2nd/3rd are basically add ons to the original story/universe. They include many more characters with large scale social dynamics, drawn out battle scenes, and the writing is less focused and more broad-appeal tropey. In the first movie society is something to exist outside of; in the sequels it's something the characters are a part of. In the first they literally blow up a federal building; in the sequels there are respected politicians. The end of the first is one of overcoming and creative destruction; the end of the third is that of reconciliation and hope for incremental change. I thought these stark differences where why the sequels were widely criticized?
I can see how that progression could be that of a single planned story, but rather it feels an awful lot like the first movie was successful and Hollywood wanted More. The themes of the sequels have seemingly more to do with the Wachowskis' own personal development struggles rather than abstractly following from the first. A hard truth of any critical art is that society looks a lot more comfortable after you've become successful. And well getting longer in the tooth myself, I guess that's just the cycle? shrug
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Honestly though it would be ill-advised to try to think of the Matrix as A Great Revelatory Truth About Humankind's Place In the Universe and I hope folks are past that kind of quasi-religious thinking. It's an imperfect but thought-provoking series of fictional stories.
Someone else points out that it wasn't strictly necessary to cut this sub plot to enable the second concept of "one" cycles, which I agree with, but having just the b more interesting of the two is probably more potent storytelling.
1. The whole thing is intended to refute an idea that is not widespread nor of any particular importance (a few fluffy quotes from critic reviews don't make a zeitgeist)
2. The smoking gun evidence of plotting changes between 1 and 2 is weak.
3. Even if they did change the plot between 1 and 2 that wouldn't prove they didn't have a plan going on. Sometimes things change, and "master plans" are not etched in stone
it's still very interesting though that the original idea makes Cypher much more sympathetic, and the final cut makes Morpheus more sympathetic.
but there were other matrix before the matrix in the movie
the Merovingian and Persephone were The Architech's failed versions of Neo and Trinity from the machine world, they didn't work because they could never have human "love" (this is why Persephone is so utterly fascinated by it) it took the Oracle to realize this because the Architech could never understand
I still haven't seen the newest movie and was trying to stay spoiler free but the commercials kept popping up, I really, really dislike how "clean" the digital format looks compared to the original films and Neil Patrick Harris may be a great actor but he is completely anatopical to me in a matrix movie, should be "unknowns" to avoid distraction of the actor
That literally never happens, it’s never happened that I aware of, unless the work is an adaptation.
no, each human was a single core of a vast supercomputer. The computer’s purpose is anyone’s guess, maybe it was searching for the ultimate question to make sense of 42… but life wants to create more life, perhaps the machines thought they were doing us a favor, All Watched Over by Machines of Loving Grace style. I believe the architect spells this out; they tried to give us paradise but it gave us aneurysms, as living things we need something to struggle against or else we wither and die.
“Did you know that the first Matrix was designed to be a perfect human world? Where none suffered, where everyone would be happy. It was a disaster. No one would accept the program. Entire crops were lost.”