Show HN: Chorus - It tells you what your customers think and feel
getchorus.com
getchorus.com
Why would you link to your video page instead of your front page (http://www.getchorus.com/), which I assume is at least somewhat optimized for conversion/understanding?
So, I "think" that they may already have data, and allow people to analyze it? Or does it harvest info? I'm not sure. Does it look at searches.
Seriously, I don't understand.
Just including the "Customer Radar - High engagement, Increased Customer Satisfaction, All in Real-time" text that is found on most of the other pages on that page would have made the experience a lot better; specifically pointing out a link to the home page would be helpful, too.
(Tip for others: Click on Home after clicking on the link for a list of bullet points.)
If you have lots of customers making lots of noise about lots of different issues it's going to be very hard to prioritise which of the various and apparently equally important squeaky wheels should get the grease (ie. your limited time) and this looks to me as though it would be an invaluable asset in helping make those types of decisions.
One of the screenshots (Trending Topics) is of spreadsheet/tabular data where the first item says "Frustrated (Repitition)" [sic]. You should remove the spelling mistake from the image as it is very apparent, being the first cell in the spreadsheet.
Then it analyzes all the data, figuring out who's happy, who's unhappy. You can then search the results. Main example: type in a product that your company sells, Chorus will tell you how your customers feel about it, how the feelings are changing over time, and what you need to address now to make your customers more happy.
Mentioning that you were rejected comes off as an intention to "prove PG wrong". You should build a great app to do yourself and your customers justice, not to one-up somebody.
The pitch needs to be simpler, I gave your video a chance but you showed me how to enter fields on a sign up form. Didn't finish the video so can't comment on the product.
All the best to you and fwiw as someone else mentioned, I specifically clicked on this post because i was in "i need a distraction" mode. So I did give your video a shot, but it's hard to listen to 5 minutes of talk.
Just from my perspective I'd like the core of the message to hit me in the face in the first 30 seconds. Then you can drill down into the specifics as time goes on. If you research how newspaper articles are written they use the same concept. They give you the core of the story in the first paragraph. Then as you read more the details and nuances of the article are better articulated.
HTH