Life after 6 YC rejection
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1) Make the voice-over English. Yes, I know. But English is the lingua franca*, for better or worse.
2) The tech demo is great, but maybe have the demo be a nice place, instead of graffiti-filled basement?
3) Change the text to "Preview" vs. "Example 1"
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* I realize the irony ;)