How to Make Writing a Lot Easier
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I remember an author once saying there are two kinds of authors: those who like to write and those who like to have written. The interviewee was in the latter category.
Given that this article is about writing, here's a comment on the writing itself. It needs a rewrite. It's a good rough draft with maybe the kernel of a good idea, but in its current form is barely readable. It's stream of consciousness writing that doesn't fulfill the promise made in the title.
Or, maybe it does in fact fulfill that promise. If the goal is quantity of words - and 10,000 words a week in particular then never editing a rough draft is one strategy to get there. Just keep writing, never stopping to reconsider anything. Treat the screen you're typing on as an append-only log file. If so, well played!
There are readers who like to read and those who like to have read something. I went to this article with the intent of getting actionable advice to make writing easier. Half way through the article, this author hasn't even articulated a problem I can identify with.
Here's how to start the edit. Throw away half the words, then throw away the half that are left. Now start again.
Maybe the difference between writers who like to write and those who like to have written is that the latter take editing the mess they've created far more seriously than the former.
I’m a writer and a runner, and that’s exactly how I feel about both. I rarely like starting, it’s sometimes pleasant but often grueling during, and I always feel a great sense of satisfaction afterwards.
I like this a lot. It succinctly points to an thought that's been at the forefront of my mind lately.
It seems to align with Daniel Kahneman's work about our two versions of our "self": an experiencing self (the writer) and the remembering self (the one who has written). As you allude, sometimes those two may not align in terms of what brings them happiness or fulfillment.
It makes me think I should be working to make sure I'm the one who optimizes for the experiencing self rather than the remembering self. Besides the fact that we spend much more time "experiencing" life than "remembering" it, the latter seems too often correlated with things outside our direct control like status etc.
It takes some dedication but the hardest part is starting, especially when everyone assumes their first story will be great. After you put in the time and practice and then write your first 10 pages, the next 180 are relatively easy.
The first things people write will be bad. You have to just practice until you get past that and most people get discouraged before then. It’s an extremely fun and relaxing hobby if you can get past that bump
Edit: sigh… I have an in progress writing prep app with a trailer and everything but it’s not hosted yet, so I can’t link to it. Serves me right for putting it off
I'm personally really turned off by that particular writing style. Sometimes it annoys me so much that I close the tab right away, even though I was originally interested in the topic. That probably tells you more about me than about the authors. (Ha! I just made that comment about myself, too. Take that, bloggers!)
But the fact that I see this happening frequently now makes me wonder: is that perhaps a writing style that is taught in school somewhere? Certainly not in the place and at the time that I went to school but it could be that this style is perhaps actively encouraged somewhere else?
I'd be grateful for any insights / experiences.
Sometimes, although rarely, this makes perfect sense, as in Surely You're Joking, Mr. Feynman! - but in practice everybody thinks they're special.
If so, it makes you wonder if most people actually _do_ want to see such a personal touch in what they read -- no matter what the topic is.
Perhaps it's just me then who can't stand it, at least not when it's completely orthogonal to the topic at hand.
The writer's backstory for the recipe is so inconsequential to my wanting that specific set of instructions. Yet there it is, every time.
I can also hazard a guess that there are more Thinking people lurking in HN vs Feeling people, thus the general repulsion towards that style of writing.
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Myers%E2%80%93Briggs_Type_In...
I don't know if you have visited any online recipe website recently, but that's not how things are any more.
Now people preface all that with how they feel, their car problems, the last show they binged over on Netflix, and the entomology of the word "chinchilla".
It's frustrating.
Have a good day
"Just start writing. Write whatever you want but write and write and keep writing. Eventually what you want will appear on the page and you'll edit out the random blabbering".
Made a huge difference for me because my problem was the initial blank page.
As a non-native English speaker, I usually require about 8 months straight (4hrs/day) to produce a full paper with ~8000 words. Note that this is after all research is done and all results are already available. It is a multi-iteration process. It is also critical that I accept not keeping parts for just an end in itself (e.g. not throwing away text that took time to produce): If it does not support the main message of the paper, it gets removed eventually. Clinging to text was my biggest mistake as a beginner because it effectively prevented succinct synthesis (btw. this is mentioned in the blog post, too). Having mentors that point to redundant text helps.
Even in technical (non-fiction) writing there are different styles, and when in doubt it should really be clarity that wins. Especially in documentation and such.
I do notice that in my native language it's a bit easier to make a serious point while also writing in a somewhat entertaining style, but that's really just extra fluff. Like you say, at the end of the day people don't read what you have to say for your style, but for your content.
> It is also critical that I accept not keeping parts for just an end in itself (e.g. not throwing away text that took time to produce): If it does not support the main message of the paper, it gets removed eventually.
I copy/paste these things to a draft document for some future usage, where it's more appropriate. This way you're not "throwing it away" but just "re-organizing it".
To summarize:
- Whenever you're reading/learning/researching/thinking something, you write down "fleeting" notes in your journal, just jotting down ideas you don't want to forget. It's effortless and natural, doesn't feel as scary as writing, you're not staring at the blank page, you're just collecting useful ideas as you live and work.
- Then you try to process these notes regularly (daily or weekly) - take the key insights you want to remember, add them to your "writing inbox", through the inbox and turn the notes into "evergreen atomic notes" - a cleaned up and organized version of your fleeting notes. You turn each useful idea into a single, concise note with a good title. One concept per note. Interlink the notes - link the note to related ideas, add tags, put notes into folders, whatever makes it easy to search through them later on.
- When it's time to write, you have an archive of all the most useful ideas you have learned, organized by subject, interlinked with each other. Now all you have to do is take several related notes, compose them into an article, edit and fill in the blanks.
So you never have to stare at the blank page. You naturally write as you live, then you organize your thoughts a little better into the evergreen notes, then you organize these notes into articles, videos, books, whatever you want to produce.
You can learn more about it in the amazing series of posts here: https://publish.obsidian.md/andymatuschak/Evergreen+notes
I got into the whole thing after learning about Obsidian (https://obsidian.md/), a cool app for writing and organizing such notes (no affiliation, I just like it).
I was already writing down all my notes in Editorial (a really cool iOS app, unfortunately hasn't been updated in a long time, 1Writer is a great alternative). But I would never reread them or turn them into anything useful to anyone. Taking the extra step of cleaning up and organizing my notes is very helpful, now I do this for everything - personal stuff, my work projects, everything Im learning about tech, writing, etc.
My solution is to be more forgiving. Paper is cheap. I can try bold concepts and fail miserably. I can stop halfway through a sketch and try something else, or revisit it years later. No one is keeping track. In the end, I learn more from drawing poorly than from not drawing at all.
I am also forgiving when I write. The content I publish gets revised several times over many years, like a family recipe that improves with every attempt. Through each iteration, I find better ways to explain things to my readers. On the internet, I can republish as often as you want, so there's no cost to getting it mostly right.
Writing legible, interesting, persuasive, succinct, informative, insightful, lucid, precise or revealing copy is more difficult.
Try writing about yourself, or some past experience and try to make it as engaging as it was for you - like a writing about a job you had in the past.
I don't find it easy.
But if you were just writing for the sake of it and putting down word afterword without really thinking about what you’re saying or not even caring what the reader is thinking at all just speaking whatever comes to mind in some sort of you know some sort of aSelf centred sort of a style which isn’t really a style it’s really just talking to yourself well you know that’s um yeah that’s not so hard really I’m just sort of do it you know? Yeah and you can and you actually don’t have to write it or you can just talk into your phone!
Putting words on paper is easy. Putting "good" words on paper is hard or editing the words you put on paper so they are "good" is hard. Use whatever definition of "good" that you would like.
Good words hard.
I think that goes for a lot of creative endeavors, and programming too for that matter. But I'm not sure that's very helpful advice when you must write, particularly about a topic you don't care as much about, need specific ideas/research for, and/or with a strict deadline. It's like "make something easier by doing it for your own satisfaction." Of course, but doesn't help if I'm doing something less interesting primarily for a paycheck.
As in "write a lot of stuff, in an easy way" and not "make writing much less difficult".
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I can write 10000 words on the spot on any random word picked out of the dictionary. Even a one I don't know at all.
Friends loved to test me on this, picking up some BS topic and see if I can come up with a scenario or a song. Then after a few minutes of my rambling they get bored of course. Having something to say doesn't mean it's interesting.
My problem is rather to learn to shut up about things and accept it's usually wiser to not have an opinion on most things.
The vast majority of words do not need to be spoken or written, but it's hard to do for me.
Case in point: was this comment worth writing?
But the process is the same, at least for me.
I assume other people do it differently, but the point is, writer's blocks seems alien to me. As long as you are not in a coma, I don't see how your mind cannot come up with something. And as long as it can, something worth committing too can be found.
It's not like sport when you have an actual physical limitation. You brain is literally a machine to produce ideas. It does that constantly, in mass.
Everybody has it, because everybody have weird dreams when they sleep.
Anyone can play guitar too. Making music is harder. Making music express your feelings harder still.
If I spend 20 minutes, I will just produce BS. If I invest more time and energy, something good will come out.
When I was a kid I always assumed everybody was the same: you could always express what you had in mind. Took me years to realize not only it's not the case, but most people actually don't use words for their meaning at all.
Once I got that, my oral communication improved tremendously, but writing stayed mostly the same. Oral can be messy, sometimes it's even better than way. On paper, though, being clear is a virtue.
And if you can't be clear from the beginning, just babble until your brain gets in the flow, and you'll get to something eventually. Then strip the useless part, clean up the good one, and you got a winner.
For quality, reapply filters.
For subject you know nothing about, either research, or just play with your ignorance.
However, when trying to tell a story or covering a subject that I really care about, that's a whole other ball game.
The good old advice of "just start writing" is easy to follow when words flow naturally.
And it works.
It's easier to filter than to shape. And easier to shape something already filtered than shaping from a blank page.
Also, not all writing have to be good. A lof of them already have value if they are not bad.
After all, writing for the purpose of writing is a beautiful endeavor, but writing for sharing information is a great in itself, and a perfect but non-existing reference will always worse than a dry but at hand paper.
The problem is as you become an adult, you don't feel like writing about a topic you don't care anymore, even for money.
So I'm guessing the one remaining are very expensive.
When I write, the premise is I attempt to turn shit to gold, eventually.
Closer to the truth is as described in this article, writing is more like blind plumbing work. It's very revisional. Whole paragraphs and pages are reworked and outright deleted left and right. The final script is rarely in the order you started. Then your editor goes to work, butchering your baby. It's very painful, but you know this is the way to end up with something the reader finds readable.
Reading a published novel as a wannabe author, you must keep in mind that it's revised to perfection. Repeatedly hammered like a Japanese sword. Writing is definitely a forging process and not magic.
Yes, in fact, I'm so used to that I sometimes edit my HN comments 10 to 15 times, and get frustrated when the "edit" link disappears.
But the initial one is always easy to write. I don't wonder "geez, what could I say?". It also often sucks, full of typo, things that could be badly interpreted, and so on.
Funny thing is, I'm currently learning to let it suck. Invest less energy. And as this thread proves, I'm failing miserably at it :)
They talk about how easy it is to write random words and how hard it is to write well, and you keep explaining that you're supposed to remove the filters, start by writing random words, and then edit until it's good.
I think that's the difference between the people who have writer's block and the people who don't. People without the writer's block are able to relax their filters, people who suffer from writer's block are trying to write well right away, and it's hard and painful.
Ha said that, even understanding your advice consciously, I still find it incredibly difficult to apply. Logically, I see that there's no reason to be ashamed of writing a bad draft, I don't feel like I'm afraid of being judged by people, or like I judge myself, I think that I want to be able to just babble until I stumble upon something good I can refine. But for some reason, my brain just refuses to do that.
Maybe it's difficult because my brain feels like "babbling" is a waste of time and energy, and I always give up before it gets good. Maybe because it's difficult to motivate myself to do things when I don't have a plan, don't feel like I have control over what's going on, don't have the guarantee that my efforts will pay off. Maybe it has something to do with status or confidence or insecurities that apply these filters whether or not I choose to. I dunno. I know that these reservations are silly, but I see why people struggle with it, I do too.
I think that relaxing the filters, letting go of control, and trusting in your brain's ability to generate random words and make them good later on is also a skill, and some people find it easier than others.