I think you should put 'Part 1' in the title, as I was really getting in to that story when it ended abruptly with "This post is getting extremely long so I’m going to break it up into a series type article. In the next part I’ll talk about the joy of making tens of thousands of dollars in the lead up to Christmas, the daunting phone call I received while at school that would eventually lead to the collapse of ZOR and the realization that I could be in very serious trouble. Stay tuned."
Great read so far though, looking forward to part 2.