Rather than bashing erlang like this, I'd have gotten a lot more out of an article that described how Haskell approached the problem, possibly with contrasts to erlang.
But when you start off with at best nonsense "erlang's parallelism is not parallelism" you're going to lose people who do know something about erlang.
Here's the deal with erlang: The syntax throws some people off. If you will spend a couple hours learning the language (maybe a couple days) you'll start to appreciate the syntax and it will no longer be a problem.
Erlang is not as fast as bare metal languages like, say, C, but Erlang is fantastic for making programs in parallel and executing them on multiple cores or nodes or clusters of nodes with multiple cores.
I guess I should take the occurrence of these kinds of articles as a sign that Erlang is getting wider acceptance. That's great!
But please, cheer your language, don't bash the competition.