> (ps sorry for the over use of first person - just wanted to share my perspective)
Why do you feel bad about/dislike first person (in this context)?
Why do you feel bad about/dislike first person (in this context)?
Excessive use of first person imo is a good flag that the writer is too self concerned (egotistical), which can interfere with their judgement (as it’s affected by ego and not a cold, rational look at both sides). Which I’m guilty of from time to time.
I realized that as I was halfway through, but it was too late in the night so I just pressed reply :)