It looks interesting. Since you say the book is for folks 'as untechnical as my Mom', I'll get a copy for my young niece that is trying to get into programming.
You have a minor typo on the page - 'enthrawled' should be 'enthralled'
You have a minor typo on the page - 'enthrawled' should be 'enthralled'
She's a brilliant woman whom I respect very much. I didn't intend for my phrasing to be denigrating and I apologize for how it is phrased.
I hope your niece likes it, I would honestly love to know how she handles it. I bet she'll get a lot of the ideas, and might have to skip over some of the nitty-gritty details.
Sure that it's not "entrawled in data", like someone entangled in a swift web of information? ;)