Would benefit from a professional editor/proofreader -- there are quite a few typos as well as english mistakes.
Still, he is smart for moving fast, and it looks like there is good value here.
Still, he is smart for moving fast, and it looks like there is good value here.
"node takes a leap from that that says" "and use it to make a easy way" "the rigth way of doing" "what many people belive is the right direction"
All in the section "Why the sudden and exponential popularity?" (which is not even a very long section).
However, that aside, this looks good. The style is pacey and informed, the content looks useful and sufficiently technical without being a physics paper, I might even stump up some cash after reading the free pages.