What is inside someone's direct control if not their choices?
I'm not commenting on the content of the article or the issue of discrimination in general. But the above sentence is horrible reasoning.
What is inside someone's direct control if not their choices?
I'm not commenting on the content of the article or the issue of discrimination in general. But the above sentence is horrible reasoning.
But it's confusing to use a word like "choose" and then immediately say "outside of their direct control".
On reflection, I think the point that you were trying to make was something like:
"Regardless of whether the cause is societal pressure, neurobiology, or personal choices, women are potentially suffering from lower pay."
I liked the article before the conclusion, however.
Person1: "My house washed away!" Person2: "I have found the cause: it was that hurricane last night. My work here is done; glad I could help; you are very welcome."