Have you tried putting each important sentence on it's own paragraph? Just the important ones.
That makes a difference in focus/readability.
Try it.
That makes a difference in focus/readability.
Try it.
When you're remote you miss a lot of context. Overcommunicating in writing helps address that. Eliminating information or not expecting people to fully read and engage with what they read is going in the wrong direction of the fundamental problem.