My commentary has two parts.

First, about the topic. The title, "Real-world SRE: What not FAANG companies are doing," implies that the series is going to look at how the majority of companies (as in, not startups) are implementing SRE. This is not the approach; rather, this specific article divides the world into either FAANG or SV-style startups, and ignores everything else. That's not a microcosm I'm interested in.

Second, about the writing style. The stuttering caused by using sentence fragments everywhere is really jarring. It's so bad that I couldn't focus on the actual content. Normally I'm not much of a stickler for grammar, but in this case, it's distracting.