Launched My First Startup
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> Update the blogs and content on the website right away and notice the output.
Why not something like “Bid on and acquire expert-curated content for your blog or website in 5 minutes or less”
Also, this should have a Show HN tag since you self posted it.
Yup, that's what he's talking about. The market I assume you're going for is native English speaking so you should really get native English speakers to look over your website.
I have to perform a few double-takes as I read the site to try and parse the meaning out. I did duck into the samples themselves, and it's much the same there as well.
Not a native english speaker. So take my advice with a grain of salt. Not sure if you actually meant "eccentric". I initially thought you were addressing a niche segment of folks who wanted eccentric (slightly strange) content on their blogs just to spice things up. For example content like this - https://www.atlasobscura.com/articles/utility-pole-surfaces would fit the description of content I would describe as "eccentric and delightful" content. If that's not what you meant, you can re-evaluate that main tagline.
Maybe put that line "Get Premium content on a budget" front and center. That's a great line!
Don't worry too much about getting the grammar right. Focus on putting it out in front of many people as possible. (like you have done here on Hacker News) Bracket feedback into 2 segments: 1. Feedback from paying customers. 2. Feedback from others. Address the feedback from group 1 first.
And like others have mentioned, I'm appalled that this is on the front page.
Posts the link to Hacker News with the title "Launched My First Startup".
Hits the front page.
Fabulous.
Especially since the English on that site is on the brink of nonsense. Is it is machine-translated from another language?
Anyhow. I am flagging this. I am not sure how it got on the frontpage. But that it did is a sign that something is wrong here.
I have just started, so I am ready to take feedback. Also currently giving a 20% discount. Thank you!
Your link to #sample is broken.
> Recieve.
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I love the design, didn't really sent a lot of time reading the copy but by the design I got the impression of "this looks like something I can trust" as opposed to "this looks like some random dude wrote made something and now want my money for it..."
:D