I liked the story, and I think the points are solid, but I must ask the question: Did Chris eventually have a good career as a rapper? Is he a name we would recognize?
An article in Flak Magazine[1] describes him as "a popular MC from the Manhattan club scene."
You don't specify what you mean by "a good career," but it would appear that he's not reached the Cristal-filled-hot tub stage in life yet.
I did enjoy his songs, though.