I like that. One thing I'd change is the positioning of the OS. I was looking for it in the text and as I was clicking away happened to catch it above the screensnap. Too low in contrast and not where I'd look.
It was originally there, for what it's worth, but we ran into exactly that issue.
My personal (minimalist) favorite position was just outside the grid, to the left of the picture, with JUST the application icon -- of course, that had to be rethought as soon as we had our first iPad app submitted.
I'll keep playing with options, naturally -- can I pester you again later to get your thoughts on what we end up with?
Sure, feel free to email me -- address in my profile -- or just reply here.
If I go left of the grid, I'll probably use a vertical indicator, instead of horizontal.
I'm working on the concept of an 'info-grid' in the body of the post, so I'll push that up on the todo list.
Thanks!