3 Things
1. I asked why is it revolutionary? 2. It needs pictures. 3. More emotional copy. How does it solve the person's problem (which is obviously finding that person a partner) but are you targeting a specific niche within that niche? Some people want love, others want fun, others want things that can't be described in public :)
So how is this different from every other dating site. (and they are a LOT of them)