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Aesthetically, it looks very nice.

Advanced user interface brings a whole new experience to online task management.

This sentence is basically meaningless. Replace it with something that actually describes what's new and innovative.

Demonstrate, don't declare.

I also went hunting for a "try it" button or some clear way to see the flow quickly and clearly.

Also the UI and page are very dark... I understand that black is sexy, but it's a bit too stark IMHO... lighten it up.

Thanks Qz! Will think about alternative copy.