Yes, agreed that a screencap of Full Sail or Webtrends landing page could have added a lot of value. Great point.
Also agree that infographics aren't directly relevant to the interview but they definitely are contextually relevant.
Also agree that infographics aren't directly relevant to the interview but they definitely are contextually relevant.
If you want break up large sections, use visual cues to break up content. Since you mentioned Unbounce, see these[1][2] as inspiration. Note the use of font size and weight, lists, whitespace and images that are directly related to the copy.
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[1]http://unbounce.com/landing-page-examples/your-landing-page-... [2]http://unbounce.com/landing-page-optimization/marketing-fail...